Front cover- I think you still need to make the main lead story more obvious somehow; by placing an image at the side it limits how you embed text around the edge- how can you promote her more as an artist- the pose is too similar to the one in the DPS. Why have you used this pose and not a mid shot close up? Contents- the labelled front cover has numbers on that are not referred to in the list at the bottom half of the page. The layout breaks a lot of conventions- is this intentional?
DPS- cropping issue around the chin. No columns and not equally spaced. Boxes need some kind of alignment. There is not much text at all and the font choices need considering.
Front cover- I think you still need to make the main lead story more obvious somehow; by placing an image at the side it limits how you embed text around the edge- how can you promote her more as an artist- the pose is too similar to the one in the DPS. Why have you used this pose and not a mid shot close up?
ReplyDeleteContents- the labelled front cover has numbers on that are not referred to in the list at the bottom half of the page. The layout breaks a lot of conventions- is this intentional?
DPS- cropping issue around the chin. No columns and not equally spaced. Boxes need some kind of alignment. There is not much text at all and the font choices need considering.